Hi Ahmedmostafa,
Thanks for the trust in my perspective to such things.
I’m glad you keep going and I hope you feel the progress.
Please understand the following:
I sparely, if at all, judge or critique work or projects here.
Even if I would, an occasional silence could be taken as a negative view to someone’s work. Hence why I don’t do it.
We both went over this theme a while ago. But since we are in a forum, I’m happy to specify this and explain my reasons.
This doesn’t mean that others can’t critique it, I encourage only to keep it fair and civil.
Perhaps create a G+ Community and invite people to exchange ideas and opinions.
Perhaps we have to think about a different place to do it, as I think it should be not public. Something like “The Arcanum” for photos does it (I got a my “master” there, as I’m very interested in online training, and to explore all kind of ways how to do.
So, something that keeps things organized in guided but interactive (motivational) group. Often the progress needed to master one’s craft needs more than technical skills. But that is a longer story.
I’m certain that several 1on1 trainer who love modeling will give feedback, if upfront agreed to it.
http://1on1.maxon3d.com
Enjoy working with Cinema 4D.